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In my opinion , it is hard for me to trust completely someone who I meet online.
I don\'t understand why many people want to meet someone online insread of face to face.
I don\'t trust anyone I meet online.
It may be dishonest.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Ms. [이름]!
Trust is gained over a period of time. It could be nourished with many factors, like communication, time of togetherness, knowing his/her circle of friends, etc.
Thank you for giving your thought. Talk to you later,
Aki~
In my opinion, it is hard for me to trust completely someone who I meet online.
>>> CORRECT!
I don\'t understand why many people want to meet someone online instead of face to face.
>>> CORRECT!
I don\'t trust anyone I meet online.
>>> CORRECT!
It may be dishonest.
>>> CORRECT!
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