online classes
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One of the wotsr problems with online classes is that teachers can\'t face to face students.
Even though we do interactive online system like Zoom or Google, teachers can\'t check the students of situation if they pay attention in the classes.
Online classes are only effective when we focus on each other with the view of my experience.l
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One of the wotsr problems with online classes is that teachers can\'t face to face students.
>>> One of the worst problems with online classes is that teachers can\'t see their students face to face.
Even though we do interactive online system like Zoom or Google, teachers can\'t check the students of situation if they pay attention in the classes.
>>> Even though we do interactive online systems like Zoom or Google, teachers can\'t check the student\'s situation if they are paying attention in the class.
Online classes are only effective when we focus on each other with the view of my experience.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> Online classes are only effective when we focus well based on my experience.
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