Online education and classroon

2016-08-12 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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We had been traditionally learned classroom lessons. There are many merits of teaching in classroom. First, To study gather in one place can increase learning efficiency. We can all create an atmosphere of studying. Second, The same age can increase the emotional bond each other. A peer group play to join a game a ball without inhibitions. To share in emotional bond is important part of growing up. But online education is very different from classroom. Online education doesn't matter long and short distance. Online education can class at the same time with someone who can do on the other side of the global village. This can be also class at same time regardless of age and region and race. Imagine if they get together in one place. It seems like a very awkward and ridiculous. Everything and every system has each functions.

강사 첨삭

Hello Sir,

Well said sir! Everything has its merit and demerit. Because of technological advances, online teaching is possible. Imagine what would be possible in the future! See you later sir!

Take care!

~T. Lynn

We had been traditionally learned classroom lessons.

>>We had been traditionally learning classroom lessons.

There are many merits of teaching in classroom.

>>There are many merits of teaching in the classroom.

First, To study gather in one place can increase learning efficiency.

>>First, to study gathering in one place can increase learning efficiency.

We can all create an atmosphere of studying.

>>correct!

Second, The same age can increase the emotional bond each other.

>>Second, the same age can increase the emotional bond with each other.

A peer group play to join a game a ball without inhibitions.

>>Same peer group can join a ball game without inhibitions.

To share in emotional bond is important part of growing up.

>>To share emotional bond is an important part of growing up.

But online education is very different from classroom.

>>But online education is very different from the classroom.

Online education doesn\'t matter long and short distance.

>>In online education, it does not matter if it\'s short or long distance.

Online education can class at the same time with someone who can do on the other side of the global village.

>>In online education, you can have class with someone who might be on the other side of the globe.

This can be also class at same time regardless of age and region and race.

>>You can also have class regardless of age, region and race.

Imagine if they get together in one place.

>>correct!

It seems like a very awkward and ridiculous.

>>It would seem very awkward and ridiculous.

Everything and every system has each functions.

>>correct!

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