online or traditional education?
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Which is better for effective learning, online or traditional education?
If you don\'t have a mind to learn, learning traditional education is better for you. Because online education requires the attitude like a concentration. During online education, It\'s more easy to do the other behavior like doing game or texting messeage. So I think that learning traditional education is good way for element students. But, If you could control the attitude , learning online is more effective way. Online education remove the barrier of location. So, You could study in anywhere. In my case, I\'m studying the English in online education. I meet the English teacher using skype app. Online education save the time because I don\'t need to go to the academic place.
I have a wedding ceremony on saturday. I will attend a wedding ceremony. I have 4 days vocation. Saturday, Sunday, Monday is a memorial day and Tuseday is a my annual vacation. I will visit the Pohang to see my parents in-law.
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Hi, [이름]!
I have a wedding ceremony on saturday.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this one. See you later!
~T. Roanne ^_^
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If you don\'t have a mind to learn, learning traditional education is better for you.
>> Correct!
Because online education requires the attitude like a concentration.
>> Correct!
During online education, It\'s more easy to do the other behavior like doing game or texting messeage.
>> During online education, it\'s easier to do the other behavior like doing a game or texting messages.
So I think that learning traditional education is good way for element students.
>> So I think that learning traditional education is a good way for elementary students.
But, If you could control the attitude , learning online is more effective way.
>> But, If you could control the attitude, learning online is a more effective way.
Online education remove the barrier of location.
>> Online education removes the barrier of location.
So, You could study in anywhere.
>> So, you could study anywhere.
In my case, I\'m studying the English in online education.
>> Correct!
I meet the English teacher using skype app.
>> I meet the English teacher using Skype app.
Online education save the time because I don\'t need to go to the academic place.
>> Online education saves the time because I don\'t need to go to the academic place.
>> I have a wedding ceremony on Saturday.
I will attend a wedding ceremony. I have 4 days vocation.
>> I will attend a wedding ceremony. I have 4 days vacation.
Saturday, Sunday, Monday is a memorial day and Tuseday is a my annual vacation.
>> Saturday, Sunday and Monday is a memorial day and Tuesday is a my annual vacation.
I will visit the Pohang to see my parents in-law.
>> I will visit Pohang to see my parents in-law.
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IF YOU HAVE QUESTIONS, FEEL FREE TO ASK ME LATER. SEE YOU! ^_^
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