Online shopping
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I prefer to shop online. The most reason why i prefer online shopping is the comfortable.
In the aspect of success rate, Going to the physical store is better t[이름] online, because i can wear some clothes or look or touch the items and check if the items are okay. But all these process takes time and i have to go there.
And Even though i cannot check the item physically, i can make a decision referring plenty of reviews about the item i want to buy.
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I prefer to shop online. The most reason why i prefer online shopping is the comfortable.
>> The main reason why I prefer shopping online is that it is very convenient.
In the aspect of success rate, Going to the physical store is better t[이름] online, because i can wear some clothes or look or touch the items and check if the items are okay.
>> In terms of assurance, going to the physical store is better t[이름] online, because I can try some clothes and check if the items are okay.
But all these process takes time and i have to go there.
>> But it will take so much time and energy.
And Even though i cannot check the item physically, i can make a decision referring plenty of reviews about the item i want to buy.
>> Lastly, even though I check the item physically, I can still decide by referring to reviews about the item that I want to buy.
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