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I often visit shopping mall to buy clothing.

>>> I often visit shopping malls to buy clothes.

At that time I wore the clothing to check size.

>>> At that time, I wore the clothing to check the size.

And then, I memorized goodies number at the tag.

>>> And then I memorized the details on the tag.

After com[이름]g home, I searched that items by using goodies number, I`m able to find the price.

>>> After co[이름]g home, I searched for those items using the details on the tag and I was able to find the price.

So, It is possible to compare with online item with shopping mall price. 

>>> So, it\'s possible to compare the online items\' prices with those of traditional stores\'. 
 This way give me chance to get with reasonable price. 

>>> That way gave me a chance to buy items at a reasonable price.
 But If i get a valuables, I always go to department stores to avoid buying imitaions.

>>> But if I need some valuables, I always go to department stores to avoid buying imitations.

Because they bring me guranty about the valuables. 

>>> Because they can provide me product warranties.
In conclusion, My shopping pattens are diffrent from the item. 

>>> In conclusion, my shopping patterns depends on what I buy.
But I recommend you search price information before buying item.

>>> But I recommend you search for the price before buying something.