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Hi Debby~ I'm scared. Because, as you know, this is Monday as I said in the class. How do you feel? Do you like Monday? I'm not. I often imagine it is not Monday but Saturday. But I can't return the time to the past. Anyway, it is just that we should undergo. I know verb tenses exactly. But the reason I made a mistake is that, I should speak what I think in very short time. I'm not familiar to use English so need time to say sentences exactly. So I don't make a mistake well in the writing as you can see. I always focus to use grammar. I will be more careful to use verb tenses. Don't worry. Have a good day. Take care :) <Essay> We need change in our Government. So many leaders can't deal with problems quickly. So I really feel guilty about truth that I can't go to vote.

Hi [이름]^^   Thank you for sending this.^^ Think about this: A lot of pencils come with erasers! That means when we learn we are allowed to make mistakes and the process of  correcting mistakes is part of making things better. An eraser is there to remind us that no perfection happens without erasures.   You make mistakes and that give me a job to correct you. hahahahaha And my job is part of pushing you to be better. I appreciate the fact that you are expressive. You are a good student. Keep up the good work.   Take care.^^   T.Debby^^   PS: I\'m only excited about Mondays if I have a date.^^ We call in MONDATES! hahaha   Here are my corrections for you: Hi Debby~I\'m scared. Because, as you know, this is Monday as I said in the class. >> CORRECT OR> I don\'t look forward to Mondays like I mentioned in class.How do you feel? Do you like Monday? I\'m not. How do you feel? Do you like Monday? I don\'t. I often imagine it is not Monday but Saturday. >> CORRECT OR> I often imagine that it\'s not.  But I can\'t return the time to the past. >> CORRECT OR> But i cannot turn back time. Anyway, it is just that we should undergo. >> Anyway, it is just something that we should undergo.I know verb tenses exactly. >> CORRECT Or> I am familiar with verb tenses. But the reason I made a mistake is that, I should speak what I think in very short time. >> But the reason I made a mistake is that, I should speak what I thinking in a very short time. I\'m not familiar to use English so need time to say sentences exactly. >> I\'m not familiar in using English so I  need time to say my sentences exactly. So I don\'t make a mistake well in the writing as you can see. >> CORRECT OR> I don\'t make a lot of mistakes in writing a lot.  I always focus to use grammar. >> I always focus to using grammar. I will be more careful to use verb tenses. Don\'t worry. >> CORRECT OR> I will do better in using verb tenses. Don\'t worry.Have a good day.Take care :)>> CORRECT OR> Have a nice day. Take care^^<Essay>We need change in our Government. >> CORRECT OR> Our Government needs improvement. So many leaders can\'t deal with problems quickly. >> CORRECT OR> A lot of leaders are ineffective.  So I really feel guilty about truth that I can\'t go to vote. >> So I really feel guilty about the truth that I can\'t vote.