opening information of crime trials on TV

This one is still debatable.

Being able to see a real trial instead of the fake trials on all of the television shows would be very educational for everybody.

But, how about the people\'s right to privacy, the defendant, prosecutor and witnesses?

That was just a question.

Anyway, the way you defended your stand is excellent.

~Teacher Chloe

It is common to watch criminal trials on TV today.

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>>Nowadays, it is common to watch criminal trials on TV.

In this regard, a question is raised about whether the pros of opening trial information to the public are far more cons.

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Although merits of this trend are quite clear, I believe that demerits are more serious.
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Televised trials may offer general knowledge about laws and courts to people who need to take legal action.

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In fact, not a few people are afflicted by other’s illegal action and find difficulties to hire a lawyer or to prepare complicated trial procedure because they do not know well how to react.

>>In fact, many people are afflicted by others\' illegal actions and find difficulties hiring a lawyer or preparing for a complicated trial procedure because they do not know well how to react.

Moreover, the scene that offenders are punished by the law can promote awareness of the importance of abiding by the law.

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By showing the terrible consequences of committing a crime, we can use it as educational materials to deter crimes. 

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>>By showing the terrible consequences of committing crimes, we can use it as educational materials to deter crimes.