OPICs 2

I live in a stuido apartment located in the sidecity of Sejong.

>> I live in a studio apartment located in the side of the city of Sejong.

 It is situated far from the heart of the city, so it is quite unconvenient to live here.

>>  It is situated far from the heart of the city, so it is quite inconvenient to live here.

It would be nice that there are some more facilities.

>> It would be nice if there would be more facilities.

 There is no subway, shopping mall.

>> CORRECT

 those of things are an hour away from my place.

>> those places are an hour away from my place.

 I don’t know when my apt was built but its exterior is covered with grass, so I can see lots of insects trying to come in my house.

>>  I don’t know when my apartment was built. But, its exterior is covered with grass, so I can see lots of insects trying to come in my house.

Because it is studio apt, it has only one room where I sleep and also where I cook.

>> Because, it is a studio apartment. It has only one room where I sleep and also where I cook.

I just feel cramped when I get into my home and feel like too much trouble getting rid of mold, removing moisture.

>> I just feel cramped when I get into my home and feel like too much trouble getting rid of mold and by removing the moisture.

But I like the fact that I don’t need to pay for administration cost.

>> But I like the fact that I don’t need to pay for administration cost. \\

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