Opinion about many garbages in coastal areas.
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In many coastal areas, there are a lot of garbages and debris. After 1980s, people used plastic very much, and get rid of plastic much too. Some country and company discard their garbages in the ocean, and that makes huge garbage island and move to coastal areas or some of them move to coastal areas.
It was very serious happen, because many creatures are living on ocean and coastal areas. Turtles, seagulls, crabs, seashells, fish etc. Creatures living in the sea could eat our garbage, and lastly, the human eat them, also our descendants eat them. The earth isn\'t human\'s place only. Nature is keep circulating, so our behavior will come back to us. It\'s time to protect our planet and descendants. We have to gather effort. Persons, enterprises, nations, worldwide sould have responsibility of protecting nature. Remember that my little effort could save the planet.
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~Lucy
In many coastal areas, there are a lot of garbages and debris.
>>CORRECT!
After 1980s, people used plastic very much, and get rid of plastic much too.
>>CORRECT!
Some country and company discard their garbages in the ocean, and that makes huge garbage island and move to coastal areas or some of them move to coastal areas.
>> Some countries and companies discard their garbages in the ocean, and that makes huge garbage island and move to coastal areas.
It was very serious happen, because many creatures are living on ocean and coastal areas.
>>It was a very serious happenning, because many creatures are living on ocean and coastal areas.
Turtles, seagulls, crabs, seashells, fish etc.
>>CORRECT!
Creatures living in the sea could eat our garbage, and lastly, the human eat them, also our descendants eat them.
>>Creatures living in the sea could eat our garbage, and lastly, the human eat them, also our descendants will eat them.
The earth isn\'t human\'s place only.
>>CORRECT!
Nature is keep circulating, so our behavior will come back to us.
>>CORRECT!
It\'s time to protect our planet and descendants.
>>CORRECT!
We have to gather effort.
>>CORRECT!
Persons, enterprises, nations, worldwide sould have responsibility of protecting nature.
>>CORRECT!
Remember that my little effort could save the planet.
>>CORRECT!
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