Opinion about transportation expense
학생이 쓴 원문
I think transportation expense should not be free for normal people.
There are some reasons why I think so.
First is paying a expense for the things that I use service is absolutely \"natural thing\". When we experience service, normally we have pay for it.
If we don\'t pay anything about service, people who provide \"service\" don\'t have a reason to serve for us.
The second is we should follow capitalism logic. If we don\'t pay anything for transportation, who will pay salary for people who work for transportation company and maintenance fee? If government pay that instead of us, government will suffer from poverty of capital and they will lose chance to invest important thing for their future due to supporting this one.
I also agree that the people who have suffered from poverty should be supported for welfare purpose but I think ordinary people should pay for transportation.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this Sir Kyoung Ho. Very well said. Your explanation made sense and I do agree to them.
I think transportation expense should not be free for normal people.
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>>> OR: I think transportation fee should not be free for the common people.
There are some reasons why I think so.
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First is paying a expense for the things that I use service is absolutely \"natural thing\".
There are some reasons why I think so.
>>> correct
First is paying a expense for the things that I use service is absolutely \"natural thing\".
>>> First is paying an expense for the services that I use is absolutely a \"natural thing\".
When we experience service, normally we have pay for it.
>>> When we experience service, normally we have to pay for it.
>>> OR: When we receive services, normally we have to pay for it.
If we don\'t pay anything about service, people who provide \"service\" don\'t have a reason to serve for us.
>>> If we don\'t pay anything for the service, people who provide \"service\" don\'t have a reason to serve us.
If we don\'t pay anything about service, people who provide \"service\" don\'t have a reason to serve for us.
>>> If we don\'t pay anything for the service, people who provide \"service\" don\'t have a reason to serve us.
The second is we should follow capitalism logic.
>>> correct
If we don\'t pay anything for transportation, who will pay salary for people who work for transportation company and maintenance fee?
>>> correct
If government pay that instead of us, government will suffer from poverty of capital and they will lose chance to invest important thing for their future due to supporting this one.
>>> If the government pays for that instead of us, the government will suffer from poverty of capital and they will lose the chance to invest on important things for their future due to supporting this one.
>>> If the government pays for that instead of us, the government will suffer from poverty of capital and they will lose the chance to invest on important things for their future due to supporting this one.
I also agree that the people who have suffered from poverty should be supported for welfare purpose but I think ordinary people should pay for transportation.
>>> correct
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