Opinion of Santa Claus
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was a child, I believe in Santa Claus.
I believe Santa Claus give me presents when I sleep in the night.
But when I was 13 years old, I saw Santa Claus identity… I don’t believe Santa anymore😚
강사 첨삭
Hello Jenna. Thank you for making your composition. Same here, I think there\'s nothing wrong with believing in something. We will talk more about this in class. Happy holidays! ~ T. Lyn
When I was a child, I believe in Santa Claus.
>>As a child, I believed in Santa Claus.
I believe Santa Claus give me presents when I sleep in the night.
I believe Santa Claus give me presents when I sleep in the night.
>>I believe that Santa Claus gives me presents when I sleep at night.
But when I was 13 years old, I saw Santa Claus identity…
But when I was 13 years old, I saw Santa Claus identity…
>>But when I was 13, I discovered the true identity of Santa Claus.
I don’t believe Santa anymore
>>So, I don\'t believe in Santa anymore.
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