Opinion Sample
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Great Tuesday morning Mr. [Name]!
Hope you are already having a great day today.
When it comes to celebrating children\'s birthday, it\'s really impractical to celebrate birthdays expensively.
And I do agree that it will really send a wrong signal to the children someday.
So it is always good and best to celebrate the children\'s birthday at home, with the family and close friends.
I think it matters the most.
See you gain tomorrow!
Continue the positivity today!
Smile smile!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
First opinion sample talk about how speaker is going to spend his vacation.
>> The first opinion sample talks about how the speaker is going to spend his vacation.
He has a plan to take a week off and travel during his birthday to fine himself.
>> He has a plan to take a week off and travel during his birthday to find himself.
He looks like that he has been satisfied with his current situation but he doesn\'t know what he has to do during his life and what he really wants to do.
>> correct!
So, I think that he need a time to reflect his life.
>> So I think that he needs time to reflect about his life.
Second opinion criticizes the way of celebration for their children.
>> The second opinion criticizes the way to celebrate children\'s birthday.
A lot of parents tend to throw a expensive party to celebrate their children\'s birthday.
>> A lot of parents tend to throw an expensive party to celebrate their children\'s birthday.
The speaker says that it is not a good way for their children and it has possibility to send the wrong signal to their children.
>> correct!
Actually I have a interesting experience related to second opinion.
>> Actually I have an interesting experience related to the second experience.
Last my birthday, I received very expensive restaurant boucher as my birthday gift from my younger brother.
>> During my last birthday, I received a very expensive restaurant voucher as a birthday gift from my younger brother.
So we went there to eat special food.
>> So we went there to eat some special food.
At the enterance my daughter said like this \"I\'ve been here because of my friend birthday party\"
>> At the entrance, my daughter said like this, \"I\'ve been here because of my friend\'s birthday party.\"
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