Opinions are important!
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes, opinions are important. It\'s better to talk about and share opinions. Because sharing opinions is sharing each other\'s thoughts, even one topic can be considered from multiple perspectives. The more people you talk to and the more you share their opinions, the wiser people become.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
Yes, opinions are important.
>>> CORRECT!
It\'s better to talk about and share opinions.
>>> CORRECT!
Because sharing opinions is sharing each other\'s thoughts, even one topic can be considered from multiple perspectives.
>>> CORRECT!
The more people you talk to and the more you share their opinions, the wiser people become.
>>> CORRECT!
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