Opportunity

Good Opportunities A good opportunity means a chance to learn or improve myself. One example of a good opportunity I had was joining an English class. It helped me practice speaking and gain more confidence. I think it is important to take opportunities when they come. They may not appear again, so we should not miss them. In my opinion, opportunities are created by effort, not just by luck

Great work, Jenny! I really like your composition about opportunities. Your sentences are clear, organized, and show deep thinking. I can see how much your English is improving, you’re expressing yourself with more confidence each time. I especially like your idea that opportunities are created by effort, not just luck, that’s very inspiring! Keep writing and practicing like this, and you’ll continue to level up your skills. You’re doing amazing, Jenny, well done!

~Teacher Cathy

 

A good opportunity means a chance to learn or improve myself.

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OR>>A good opportunity is a chance to learn or improve myself.

One example of a good opportunity I had was joining an English class.

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OR>>One great opportunity I had was getting to join an English class.

It helped me practice speaking and gain more confidence.

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OR>>It helped me practice speaking while also building my confidence.

I think it is important to take opportunities when they come.

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OR>>I believe it is important to take opportunities when they arise.

They may not appear again, so we should not miss them.

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OR>>Since they may not come again, we should make sure not to miss them.

In my opinion, opportunities are created by effort, not just by luck.

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OR>>In my opinion, opportunities come from effort, not just luck.