optical surgery
학생이 쓴 원문
In my case, I took big help with optical surgery.
I should wear glasses for long time from I was a child.
After optical surgery in 30 years old, I can become free glasses.
Of course my eyesight is bad now owing to aging.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Ms. [이름]!
Oh, I didn\'t know that you also have undergone this procedure. A lot of people wanted to be free from eyeglasses, but I think LASIK surgery is quite expensive. Tell me your experience later in class. See you!
Aki~
In my case, I took big help with optical surgery.
>>> Personally, optical surgery has helped me a lot.
I should wear glasses for long time from I was a child.
>> I should have worn glasses for a long time since I was a child.
After optical surgery in 30 years old, I can become free glasses.
>>> After optical surgery at 30 years old, I can become free from glasses.
Of course, my eyesight is bad now owing to aging.
>>> CORRECT!
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