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Hi Mishelle.
I think university classes is option for students.
Because, Classes limite of theory.
Theory and reality are different.
But Korea companies treat university students to salary.
so Korea students blieve that go to university.
If they needs to lean some skill, they should go to university of 2 years.
the other thing, If they need more then skill, they should go to universigy of 4years.
This is just my opinion.
So. have a nice day and see you tomorrow.
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Job well done, [이름]! I agree to waht ytou have said. We don\'t learn everything in school!Teacher MichelleHere are some corrections for you:Hi Mishelle. >>Hi, MichelleI think university classes is option for students.>>I think the university classes are an option for students.Because, Classes limite of theory. >>Because classses are theoretical.Theory and reality are different.>>CorrectBut Korea companies treat university students to salary.>>But Korean companies base salaries from attending the university.so Korea students blieve that go to university.>>So Korean studnet beleive that everyone must go to the university.If they needs to lean some skill, they should go to university of 2 years.>>If they need to learn some skills, they should go to the university for at least 2 years.the other thing, If they need more then skill, they should go to university of 4years.>>Another thing, if they need to learn more skills, they should go to the university for at least 4years.This is just my opinion. >>CorrectSo. have a nice day and see you tomorrow. >>So, have a nice day and see you tomorrow.
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