Orange

2016-01-20 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

학생이 쓴 원문

There are colour orange and fruit orange. What I'm going to talk about is the fruit orange. Orange has lots of vitamin c. Orangese are very sweet and orange . Also when you are peeling the pill on the orange sometimes the vitamin could go in your eyes.And when it does go in your eye it hurts your eye.

강사 첨삭

Hi MIN!:) Happy Wednesday!   Thank you for these composition. Though I got confused with some of your sentences, I still made some modifications as to how I understood it.^_^ See you in class.   ~T. Mayleen   There are colour orange and fruit orange. >> There is an orange color and orange as a fruit.What I\'m going to talk about is the fruit orange. >> CORRECTOrange has lots of vitamin c. >> Orange is rich in Vitamin C. Orangese are very sweet and orange >> DID YOU MEAN: Sunkist is a very sweet kind of orange.Also when you are peeling the pill on the orange sometimes the vitamin could go in your eyes. >> YOU MEAN: When you are peeling oranges, be careful not to get some juice or extract into your eyes. And when it does go in your eye it hurts your eye. >> If it happens, it might hurt your eyes    

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