ordering food is not easy
학생이 쓴 원문
I enjoy many different kinds of food, which is why I like going to buffets. A buffet has all sorts of dishes- korean,chinese,sushi,and Italian- so I don\'t have to worry about deciding what to order. I can see everything right in front of me. and simple pick what I want to eat.
At the same time, when I go to my favorite restaurant,I stick to the same dish every time.It makes me feel comfortable and satisfied.
When I go to a restaurant for the first time,I usually order its signature dish.
I feel safer that way because it is the one most people like.
I guess I \'m a little afraid of trying food I don\'t know.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [Name]! It’s so relatable how you enjoy the adventure of buffets, being able to see and choose everything you want, but also love the comfort of sticking to your favorite dish at a restaurant. Ordering the signature dish when you try a new place is such a smart idea. It’s safe and usually really tasty! I also think it’s totally normal to feel a little hesitant about trying unfamiliar food.
-T. Sonny
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I enjoy many different kinds of food, which is why I like going to buffets.
>>Correct!
A buffet has all sorts of dishes- korean,chinese,sushi,and Italian- so I don\'t have to worry about deciding what to order.
>>Correct!
Or. A buffet has all sorts of dishes—Korean, Chinese, sushi, and Italian—so I don’t have to worry about deciding what to order.
I can see everything right in front of me. and simple pick what I want to eat.
>>I can see everything right in front of me and simply pick what I want to eat.
At the same time, when I go to my favorite restaurant,I stick to the same dish every time. It makes me feel comfortable and satisfied.
At the same time, when I go to my favorite restaurant,I stick to the same dish every time. It makes me feel comfortable and satisfied.
>>At the same time, when I go to my favorite restaurant, I stick to the same dish every time because it makes me feel comfortable and satisfied.
When I go to a restaurant for the first time,I usually order its signature dish. I feel safer that way because it is the one most people like.
>>When I visit a restaurant for the first time, I usually order its signature dish since I feel safer that way, knowing it is the one most people like.
I guess I \'m a little afraid of trying food I don\'t know.
>>Correct!
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