ostracize

2025-10-21 · 첨삭 강사 Aki

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When I read a this sentence my heart feel hurt, \"he is ostracized by the people who are supposed to be his friend\". A kind of prevalent discrimination is ostracize that people are treated like an invisible person. Betrayal and loneliness make exhausting of any human

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, Ms. [이름]!
I agree with you, being ostracized can deeply hurt a person’s feelings and self-esteem because we naturally want to be part of a group. Sometimes people are ostracized because of differences in appearance, beliefs, behavior, or economic status, but this is unfair and harmful.
Enjoy the rest of your day!
Aki~

When I read a this sentence my heart feel hurt, \"he is ostracized by the people who are supposed to be his friend\".
>>>  When I read this sentence, my heart felt hurt, \"he is ostracized by the people who are supposed to be his friends\".

A kind of prevalent discrimination is ostracize that people are treated like an invisible person.
>>> A kind of prevalent discrimination is ostracism, where people are treated like invisible persons.

Betrayal and loneliness make exhausting of any human.
>> CORRECT!

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