other method to study english.
학생이 쓴 원문
One of my friends recommend If you find people who can talk with you in english, it's better join on-line chat room. It helps your english like how to write and your english typing.I tried to follow my friend's advice. It's the first time to chat with foreigners. I couldn't understand chat words. I asked one of my chatmates. She tought me lots of words to adjust in that room. most of them It 's not throught that experience, I knew los of imformation.I decided to study about circumstance about my country like how's going on, what is the main issue, what is problems. To tell the truth, I don't like politics and criminal news. So when I encounter that suject, I couldn't answer I satisfied. I hasitate to tell sth, because I don't know exactly.
Be patience to study and keep studying
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름], thank you for this composition. Kindly check on the corrections and learn from it. Be patient. Always take care. Have a great day!
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One of my friends recommend If you find people who can talk with you in english, it's better join on-line chat room.
>>One of my friends recommended to join an on-line chat room in order to find people to talk to in English.
It helps your english like how to write and your english typing.
>> It helps you improve your English writing and typing skills.
I tried to follow my friend's advice.
>>correct
It's the first time to chat with foreigners.
>>correct
>>It's my first time to chat with foreigners.
I couldn't understand chat words.
>>I couldn't understand some chat terms.
I asked one of my chatmates.
>>correct
She tought me lots of words to adjust in that room.
>>correct
most of them It 's not throught that experience, I knew los of imformation.
>>Most of them is not from experience, I learned lots of information.
I decided to study about circumstance about my country like how's going on, what is the main
issue, what is problems.
>>I decided to study about the different crcumstances in my country like the main issues and problems.
To tell the truth, I don't like politics and criminal news.
>>To tell you the truth, I don't like politics and crime news.
So when I encounter that suject, I couldn't answer I satisfied.
>>So when I encounter that subject, I couldn't answer satisfactory.
I hasitate to tell sth, because I don't know exactly.
>>I hesitate to talk about it because I don't know exactly.
Be patience to study and keep studying
>>Be patient and study hard.
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