Other welfare systems in Gyeonggi Province
학생이 쓴 원문
In my neighborhood, Each bus stop has a big waiting booth. The waiting booth has a heater and benches are warm with electricity. Also, an electric display tells what time each bus arrives, so we don\'t have to go out and wait for the bus. Along with the warm public toilets, I like the waiting booth.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Gi [이름]!
Hearing about the facilities in Korea makes me really curious because we don’t have those in my country since we don’t have a winter season. At least the government is trying to make public spaces comfortable for everyone, whether you are hiking or waiting for a bus.
- T. Caitlyn
In my neighborhood, each bus stop has a big waiting booth.
>> CORRECT
The waiting booth has a heater and benches are warm with electricity.
>> The waiting booth has a heater, and the benches are heated with electricity
Also, an electric display tells what time each bus arrives, so we don\'t have to go out and wait for the bus.
>> Also, an electronic display shows when each bus arrives, so we don’t have to go outside and wait.
Along with the warm public toilets, I like the waiting booth.
>> CORRECT
>> OR: Along with the warm public toilets, I also like the waiting booths
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