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2016-08-29 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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Korean invented the oldest movable metal type-Anthology of Great Buddhist Priests Zen Teachings(Jijisimcheyojel in Korean language)-in the world. It was a 1377 year. Jiji is 80 years faster than Gutenberg's metal printed book. Baeje which was the one of three kingdoms in Korean Peninsula bequeathed to Japan the Asoka's civilization in 700 year. In 1443, King Sejong created Hamgul in the Joseon Dynasty. Admiral Lee Sun-sin won using turtle-shapped ships in the sea battle for the first time in the world. But Korea was colonized to Japan in 1910. Our culture is very proud of and excellent, but was humiliated with historical event.

강사 첨삭

Hello sir,

Those were great inventions which I\'m sure greatly helped your ancestors. You really should be proud of your ancestors legacy to your country. Have a nice day sir. See you on Wednesday!

Take care!

~T. Lynn

Korean invented the oldest movable metal type-Anthology of Great Buddhist Priests Zen Teachings(Jijisimcheyojel in Korean language)-in the world.

>>A Korean had written the oldest movable metal print book which has the title \'The Anthology of Great Buddhist Priests\' Zen Teachings \'(Jijisimcheyojel in Korean language).

OR>>Koreans has the world\'s oldest extant book printed with movable metal type whose full title can be translated as, \'The Monk Baegun\'s Anthology of the Great Priests\' Teachings on Identification of the Buddha\'s Spirit by the Practice of Seon. .

It was a 1377 year.

>>It was the year 1377.

Jiji is 80 years faster than Gutenberg\'s metal printed book.

>>Jikji was written 80 years before Gutenberg\'s metal printed book.

Baeje which was the one of three kingdoms in Korean Peninsula bequeathed to Japan the Asoka\'s civilization in 700 year.

>>Baeje which is one of the three kingdoms in the Korean Peninsula bequeathed this to Japan\'s Asoka civilization in the year 700.

In 1443, King Sejong created Hamgul in the Joseon Dynasty.

>>correct! (Spelling: Hangul)

Admiral Lee Sun-sin won using turtle-shapped ships in the sea battle for the first time in the world.

>>correct!
But Korea was colonized to Japan in 1910.

>>But Korea was colonized by Japan in 1910.

Our culture is very proud of and excellent, but was humiliated with historical event.

>>Our culture is very proud of our excellent accomplishments, but we were humiliated with historical events.

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