Our favorite holiday is chu suk and lunar new year\'s day.

2019-06-07 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

학생이 쓴 원문

We count day by moon. The teacher on Wednesday teach me well. She is young and kind. By june 17th day I must finish my English translation homework and at the same time I must get the test. In these day I am not watching TV movies at all. The money making apps on the phone makes me pleasant. Thanks for reading. Bye.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Wee!

Thanks for doing your homework ^^

I hope you re having a great night ☺

Keep writing ☺

We count day by moon.
>> We use the moon as a time meter.

The teacher on Wednesday teach me well.

>> The teacher last Wednesday taught me well.

She is young and kind.
>> CORRECT

By june 17th day I must finish my English translation homework and at the same time I must get the test.
>> I will be able to finish my English translation homework on June 17th and take the test as well.

In these day I am not watching TV movies at all.

>> I don\'t watch TV these days.

The money making apps on the phone makes me pleasant.
>> The money making apps on the phone makes me feel pleasant.

Thanks for reading.
Bye.

>> CORRECT

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