Our Hangul!

2012-10-18 · 첨삭 강사 Grace

학생이 쓴 원문

Hangul is very good alphabet! Sejong the Great was make them! Hangul is most scientific writing system!!! It is so great letters. Hangul is famous in the world. And it's popular because of PSY's 'Gangnam sytle'!,too Later, Our Hangul will became a great letters~^^

강사 첨삭

Hi Sarah! It\'s good that you\'re proud of your alphabet! Thank you for this wonderful composition. See you on Friday! Cheerios! teacher GRACE Hangul is very good alphabet! >> Hangeul is a very good alphabet.Sejong the Great was make them! >> Sejong the Great created them.Hangul is most scientific writing system!!! >> Hangeul is the most scientific writing system.It is so great letters. >> It has great letters!Hangul is famous in the world. >> Correct!And it\'s popular because of PSY\'s \'Gangnam sytle\'!,too>> Correct Later, Our Hangul will became a great letters~^^ >> In the future, Hangeul will become great because of its letters!

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