Our lives after pandemic infection.
학생이 쓴 원문
How did the pandemic change your life?
At first I always must wear the mask. Wearing the mask is very sweaty and makes me a breathless. Secondary I can\'t travel oversea. Traveling oversea is one of my big pleasures in my life. I really want to travel to Japan. I hope to bathe in a hotspring and eat Sushi.
In addition, I can\'t meet my friends live in the city.
Do you still have fears? Have you adapted to the new normal way of living?
I have still some fears to Covid-19 infection. But these fears were reducing. I am accepting the truth that now human can\'t control the Covid-19 before vaccine or medicine were produced. I do my best to adapt the new normal way of living.
강사 첨삭
Thank you Ms. [Name]!
~Lucy
At first I always must wear the mask.
>>At first, I always must wear mask.
Wearing the mask is very sweaty and makes me a breathless.
>> Wearing the mask is very sweaty and makes me breathless.
Secondary I can\'t travel oversea.
>>Second, I can\'t travel overseas.
Traveling oversea is one of my big pleasures in my life.
>>Traveling overseas is one of my big pleasures in my life.
I really want to travel to Japan.
>>CORRECT!
I hope to bathe in a hotspring and eat Sushi.
>>CORRECT!
In addition, I can\'t meet my friends live in the city.>>In addition, I can\'t meet my friends who live in the city.
I have still some fears to Covid-19 infection.
>>CORRECT!
But these fears were reducing.
>>CORRECT!
I am accepting the truth that now human can\'t control the Covid-19 before vaccine or medicine were produced.
>>CORRECT!
I do my best to adapt the new normal way of living.
>>CORRECT!
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