Our personality is change living conditions.
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I can\'t agree. because i read research finding about identical twin.
identical twin has same genes but they has different personalitties.
so i think that out personality change living conditions.
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>>> TEACHER GEMMA
I can\'t agree. because i read research finding about identical twin.
>>> I don\'t agree because I\'ve read a research about identical twins.
identical twin has same genes but they has different personalitties.
>>> Identical twins have the same genes but they have different personalities.
so i think that out personality change living conditions.
so i think that out personality change living conditions.
>>> So I think our personality can change our living conditions.
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