Our problem is not overpopulation but under-population.
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I think because people live in a dense area, it looks like overpopulation, but it looks just right when you look at the population as a whole.
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I think because people live in a dense area, it looks like overpopulation, but it looks just right when you look at the population as a whole.
>> I think it\'s because people live in a dense area, it looks overpopulated but it looks just right when you take a look at it as a whole.
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