Our product follows global standards for connection and integration with existing systems
학생이 쓴 원문
Our product follows global standards for connection and integration with existing systems. Our products line-up are composed of M.2 Module, PCIe Card. Customers are used to connect their system directly with just a connection.
P.S. Dear [Name],
Thank you for your patience with my incorrect sentences and pronunciation. I listened someone said \" learning other language is something that I go to toward an invisible goal. These days, I was lacking in confidence. ㅜㅜ Again, I have to make a fresh start.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
It is very normal to feel less confident and vulnerable when we cannot make our sentences perfect in learning a second language such as English. however, even if I am already a teacher in English, sometimes, I feel the same as you do- less confident and vulnerable in committing mistakes. Because we are not native speakers, if we do not put more effort in creating good sentences, we can really make mistakes sometimes.
Thus, the continuous effort you make demonstrate in class already make you a winner in the road of making yourself better in English. When you speak English in Taiwan, no one will be better in answering the questions of journalist but you. So stay focused and keep getting better everyday. You are on the right track. I will guide you always.
Your explanation of your product is very professional. I like it so much. Well done!
Please go over my grammar suggestions below to make your writing and speech even better.
See you next week!
-T. Donna~
>> Our product follows global standards for connection and integration with existing systems. Our product\'s line-up are composed of M.2 Module, and the PCIe Card. Customers are used to connecting their system directly with just a connection.
P.S. Dear [Name],
Thank you for your patience with my incorrect sentences and pronunciation. I listened someone said \" learning other language is something that I go to toward an invisible goal. These days, I was lacking in confidence. ㅜㅜ Again, I have to make a fresh start.
P.S. Dear [Name],
Thank you for your patience with my incorrect sentences and pronunciation. I listened someone said \" learning other language is something that I go to toward an invisible goal. These days, I was lacking in confidence. ㅜㅜ Again, I have to make a fresh start.
>> P.S. Dear [Name],
Thank you for your patience with my incorrect sentences and pronunciation. I listened to someone saying \" Learning other language is something that I go to towards an invisible goal. These days, I was lacking confidence. ㅜㅜ Again, I have to make a fresh start.파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.