Our purpose of having events
학생이 쓴 원문
What are the purpose of having events for your academy?
Our purpose of having events is a lot of purpose.
First, it is advertisement.
It\'s important to advertise of my Academy.and
We will get a lot of customer through advertisement.
Secound, it is recognition
It is important to show of art skill. Because it will make to move a lot of people in academy.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this Sir Ko!
Our purpose of having events is a lot of purpose.
>>> We have a lot of purpose for having events.
First, it is advertisement.
>>> We have a lot of purpose for having events.
First, it is advertisement.
>>> correct
>>> OR: First, it is for advertisement.
It\'s important to advertise of my Academy. and We will get a lot of customer through advertisement.
>>> It\'s important to advertise my academy and we will get a lot of customers through advertisement.
Secound, it is recognition
>>> Second, it is for recognition.
It is important to show of art skill. Because it will make to move a lot of people in academy.
>>> It is important to show our art skill because it will draw people towards our academy.
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