Our responsibility
학생이 쓴 원문
We are responsible for harming the environment and animals.
As civilization and science developed, more environment and animals were destroyed.
Also, destructive materials are made by humans.
Now our technology will have to be used to restore the environment.
강사 첨삭
This is true, Ms. [이름]!
We are responsible for throwing harmful materials in the environment. I hope we can make some changes before it\'s too late. You were great!
~Teacher Eunice
We are responsible for harming the environment and animals.
>>> Correct!
As civilization and science developed, more environment and animals were destroyed.
>>> Correct!
Also, destructive materials are made by humans.
>>> Correct!
Now our technology will have to be used to restore the environment.
>>> Now our technology have to be used to restore the environment.
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