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It is not good whatever \'over\' or \'excessive -over-eating, over- exercising, over-heating and greed etc.
For a healthy body also needs regular and proper exercise.
Over-exercising is a kinf of obsessions.
Over- exercising makes muscle tired .
강사 첨삭
Good day, Ms. [이름]!
On point ma\'am! Anything that is too much is not good.
Thank you for expressing your thought on writing! See you in class.
Aki~
It is not good whatever \'over\' or \'excessive -over-eating, over-exercising, over-heating and greed etc.
>>>Anything that is \"over\" is not good like overeating, over-exercising, over-heating, greed, etc.
For a healthy body also needs regular and proper exercise.
>>> A healthy body also needs regular and proper exercise.
>> For us to obtain a healthy body, we need regular and proper exercise.
Over-exercising is a kinf of obsessions.
>>> Over-exercising is a kind of obsession.
Over- exercising makes muscle tired .
>>> Over-exercising makes our muscles tired.
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