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학생이 쓴 원문
In any case, \'over\' or \'excess\' is not good.
Like as Overweight, overeating, overwork,and over action and so on mean extreme.
We could be choose \'All-you-can-drink(eat)\' as one of the strategy of effective marketing tools .
But ultimately these choices can have negative effects to people\'s health and global environment.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Ms. [이름]!
You nailed it! We believe that anything \"too much\" is bad, and anything bad has an effect on us: personally, socially, and even in our environment. People should really act as the highest form of being, however, a lot of people also behave like animals who don\'t have proper judgment.
Happy weekend!
Aki~
In any case, \'over\' or \'excess\' is not good.
>>> CORRECT!
Like as Overweight, overeating, overwork, and over action, and so on mean extreme.
>>> Like as Overweight, overeating, overwork, over action, and so on mean extreme.
We could be choose \'All-you-can-drink(eat)\' as one of the strategy of effective marketing tools .
>>> We could choose \'All-you-can-drink(eat)\' as one of the strategies of effective marketing tools.
But ultimately these choices can have negative effects to people\'s health and global environment.
>>> But ultimately these choices can have negative effects on people\'s health and the global environment.
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