Overcome bad habit
학생이 쓴 원문
People sometimes don\'t know what they are doing is making others feel bad. For example, if you don\'t look at others while talking to each other, others must have annoyed because of your behavior even if you don\'t intend to. So if you see someone who does the same thing like that, you should let them know that is bad behavior and give some advice not to act like that. I had had a bad habit when I was in high school. while studying, I always shake my legs as much as making others irritated(annoyed). One of my friends told to me about my bad habit. After that, I put attention on my leg not to shake anymore. That\'s the story of how I overcome my old bad habit.
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~~ Teacher Sharon
People sometimes don\'t know what they are doing is making others feel bad.
>> People sometimes don\'t know that what they are doing is making others feel bad.
For example, if you don\'t look at others while talking to each other, others must have annoyed because of your behavior even if you don\'t intend to.
>> For example, if you don\'t look at others while talking to them, they might feel annoyed because of your behavior even if you don\'t intend to offend them.
So if you see someone who does the same thing like that, you should let them know that is bad behavior and give some advice not to act like that.
>> So if you see someone who does something like that, you should let them know that it is bad behavior and advise them not to act like that.
I had had a bad habit when I was in high school.
>> Correct
while studying, I always shake my legs as much as making others irritated(annoyed).
>> While studying, I always shook my legs which annoyed others.
One of my friends told to me about my bad habit.
>> Correct
After that, I put attention on my leg not to shake anymore.
>> After that, I made an effort not to shake my legs anymore.
That\'s the story of how I overcome my old bad habit.
>> That\'s the story of how I overcame my old bad habit.
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