P.02 homework : How would you help someone overcome his fears?
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If my favorite person had suffered from the fear, i wouldn’t have gone near it. And i would have said, “Don’t worry, i’m always here with you
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If my favorite person had suffered from the fear, i wouldn’t have gone near it.
>>If my favorite person is suffering from fear, I would advise him or her not to go near whatever makes him or her afraid.
And i would have said, “Don’t worry, i’m always here with you.
>>And I would say, \'Don’t worry, I’m always here with you.\'
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