P.15
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P.15
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1. To me, save the money is worth spending my own money.
2. To me, talking to my dream is always worth my time.
3. To me, develoment to my English ability is worth giving up my sleep.
4. To me, make a new boyfriend isn't worth losing my best friend.
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Hello!
These are my corrections/suggestions for this composition. Thank you for your time in making this one. Great job!
Always,
-T. Joanna
1. To me, save the money is worth spending my own money.
>> To me, buying my parent’s dream house is worth spending my own money. (suggestion)2. To me, talking to my dream is always worth my time.
>> To me, talking about my dream is always worth my time.3. To me, develoment to my English ability is worth giving up my sleep.
>> To me, developing my English ability is worth giving up my sleep.4. To me, make a new boyfriend isn't worth losing my best friend.
>> To me, having a new boyfriend isn’t worth losing my best friend.
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