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P.15 F 1. In this case, It's up to sutuation. If I have important promise alredy, or meeting with my boss or customer. Then I must to think about work frist. so To me, help an elderly cross the street isn't worth lateing my work. 2. To me, studying to speak English is worth enough resting time. So I am studying English everyday. 3. To me, deep in my heart to thanks to life is worth dying for.

Hello! Good job in writing this composition! You were able to express your ideas well. I noticed a few mistakes. These are my corrections: T. Joanna   P.15F1. In this case, It's up to sutuation. >>1. In this case, it's up to the situation. If I have important promise alredy, or meeting with my boss or customer. >> If I have made an important promise already, or a meeting with my boss or customer, then I must think about work frist. so To me, help an elderly cross the street isn't worth lateing my work. >> So to me, helping an elderly cross the street isn't worth being late for my work.2. To me, studying to speak English is worth enough resting time. >>2. To me, studying to speak English is worth enough spending time. So I am studying English everyday. >>Correct OR>>So I study English everyday.3. To me, deep in my heart to thanks to life is worth dying for. >>3. To me, deep in my heart, gratitude for life is worth dying for.