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2011-04-24 · 첨삭 강사 Joanna

학생이 쓴 원문

p. 16 B 1. I have a job. So I am a worker. But also student at cyber university. So I have to work and study too in a day. 2. This question is like.... Did I ever been to a white lie? And then what was that? It is my answer. When I was five years old, I just want to buy some snack on mom's money. So I want to some more, and I was lie to mom through miscount that coin. 3. I am not leave in this space. Because I living in my workplace. I just wake up for my student at 6.30 am. I have to awake by them for start to study . It's my duty too. 4. It's different way appraching my boss in each case. But I alrady know about I can learn something from my boss. I always copes with matters in positive.

강사 첨삭

Good day, charming! How was work? Let뭩 talk more about white lie tomorrow. Answer this question tomorrow. I white lie good? How can a white lie be good?

Thinking of you,

T. Joanna

 

p. 16
B
1. I have a job. So I am a worker. But also student at cyber university.
So I have to work and study too in a day.
>>I have a job and working hard. And I am also a student at Cyber University. So, I am working student every day.
2. This question is like.... Did I ever been to a white lie? And then what was that?
It is my answer.
When I was five years old, I just want to buy some snack on mom's money.
So I want to some more, and I was lie to mom through miscount that coin.
>>This question is like asking me if I ever did a white lie. Well, here뭩 my answer.

When I was five years old, I wanted to buy some snack out from my mom뭩 money. I wanted more of it so I just lied miscalculating the change.
3. I am not leave in this space. Because I living in my workplace.
I just wake up for my student at 6.30 am.
I have to awake by them for start to study .
It's my duty too.
>>I am not leaving this place because I am staying where I work. A student woke me up at 6:30 because it is my duty to wake them up for their study period.
4. It's different way appraching my boss in each case. But I alrady know about I can learn something from my boss.
I always copes with matters in positive.

>>My approach to the students is different from how I approach my boss. I am learning a lot from boss though. I always look at things in a positive perspective. 

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