P16
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good day, charming! How was work? Let뭩 talk more about white lie tomorrow. Answer this question tomorrow. I white lie good? How can a white lie be good?
Thinking of you,
T. Joanna
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1. I have a job. So I am a worker. But also
student at cyber university.
So I have to work and study too in a day.
>>I have a job and working
hard. And I am also a student at Cyber University. So, I am working student every
day.
2. This question is like.... Did I ever been to a
white lie? And then what was that?
It is my answer.
When I was five years old, I just want to buy some
snack on mom's money.
So I want to some more, and I was lie to mom
through miscount that coin.
>>This question is like
asking me if I ever did a white lie. Well, here뭩 my answer.
When I was
five years old, I wanted to buy some snack out from my mom뭩 money. I wanted
more of it so I just lied miscalculating the change.
3. I am not leave in this space. Because I living
in my workplace.
I just wake up for my student at 6.30 am.
I have to awake by them for start to study .
It's my duty too.
>>I am not leaving this place
because I am staying where I work. A student woke me up at 6:30 because it is
my duty to wake them up for their study period.
4. It's different way appraching my boss in each
case. But I alrady know about I can learn something from my boss.
I always copes with matters in positive.
>>My approach to the students is different from how I approach my boss. I am learning a lot from boss though. I always look at things in a positive perspective.
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