pacific rim

1) This is [Name]'s book. 2) Let's go to the Smiths' 3) The children's room is upstairs. 4) John's sister is twelve years old. 5) Susan - Steve's and bags have blue stickers. 6) men's shoes are on the second floor. 7) My parents' car was not expensive. 8) Charles' CD player is new. 9) This is the boy's bike. I am going to talk about pacific rim. because there isn't enough time yesterday's lesson, Provided, you are not going to watch it, I talk to you about the rest of that movie. I want you to save the money. I don't remember how much we talked about the story. but I start my opinion. I know I'm not majored in movie. but in the point of watcher this movie isn't good. because I and my girlfriend feel like going out. I missed the start of movie. but I think it's the one third of movie. because I want to see the battle of robot!! andthen, the movie goes boring steeply.

Hi there [이름]^^

I really appreciate your time and effort for telling me about the movie. I am so blessed to have you in my class. You did a good job in expressing your ideas! Keep your ideas flowing and don\'t forget to keep an eye on our goal. Please go over the corrections provided below for your improvement. Can\'t wait to talk to you again. See you! Good night!

Teacher Nina

1) This is [Name]\'s book.

>> Correct!
2) Let\'s go to the Smiths\'

>> Correct!
3) The children\'s room is upstairs.

>> Correct!
4) John\'s sister is twelve years old.

>> Correct!
5) Susan - Steve\'s and bags have blue stickers.

>> Correct!

>>OR: Susan and Steve\'s bags have blue stickers.
6) men\'s shoes are on the second floor.

>> Correct!
7) My parents\' car was not expensive.

>> Correct!
8) Charles\' CD player is new.

>> Correct!
9) This is the boy\'s bike.
>> Correct!
I am going to talk about pacific rim.

>> I am going to talk about the movie titled Pacific Rim.
because there isn\'t enough time yesterday\'s lesson,

>> Because we didn\'t have enough time yesterday.
Provided, you are not going to watch it,

>> Correct!
I talk to you about the rest of that movie.

>> I will tell you about the other parts of the movie.
I want you to save the money.

>> Correct!
I don\'t remember how much we talked about the story.

>> I can\'t remember how far we discussed about the story.
but I start my opinion.

>> But I will start with my opinion about the movie.
I know I\'m not majored in movie. but in the point of watcher

>> I know I\'m not a movie maker but as an audience.
this movie isn\'t good. because I and my girlfriend feel like going out.

>> The movie wasn\'t good because my girlfriend and I felt like going out of the movie theater.

>> OR: The movie was a bomb because my girlfriend and I felt like going out of the movie theater.
I missed the start of movie. but I think it\'s the one third of movie.

>> I missed the start of the movie but I think I watched one third of the movie.
because I want to see the battle of robot!!

>> Because I wanted to see the battle of robots.
andthen, the movie goes boring steeply.

>> Then, the movie went boring steeply.