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1) on TV often watch sport I I often watch sport on TV 2) my father in the garden in the afternoon is usually In the afternoon, my father is usually in the garden 3) she lives in Mexico She lives in Mexico 4) is he reading worksheet the He is reading the worksheet 5) sleeps never in my bed our cat Our cat never sleeps in my bed 6) window now opening is the Lisa Lisa is opening window now 7) to school we take always the bus We always take the bus to school 8) on the sitting the grandparents sofa are The grandparents are sitting on the sofa 9) after to I breakfast school go After breakfast I go to school 10) seldom Andy comes 9 pm home before Andy seldom comes home before 9pm When main actor meets heroine, suddenly they talk each other friendly. I think that part is not smoothly. and I am curious about the method of their attack. there are 5 big robot. but 3 robots are destroyed as they are introduced

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_T. Nina_

Here are my corrections:
1) on TV often watch sport I
I often watch sport on TV

>> CORRECT!
2) my father in the garden in the afternoon is usually
In the afternoon, my father is usually in the garden
>> My father is usually in the garden in the afternoon.
3) she lives in Mexico
She lives in Mexico
>> CORRECT!
4) is he reading worksheet the
He is reading the worksheet
>> CORRECT!
5) sleeps never in my bed our cat
Our cat never sleeps in my bed
>> CORRECT!
6) window now opening is the Lisa
Lisa is opening window now
>> CORRECT!
7) to school we take always the bus
We always take the bus to school
>> CORRECT!
8) on the sitting the grandparents sofa are
The grandparents are sitting on the sofa
>> CORRECT!
9) after to I breakfast school go
After breakfast I go to school
>> I go to school after breakfast
10) seldom Andy comes 9 pm home before
Andy seldom comes home before 9pm
>> CORRECT!

NOTE: Kindly put a period [.] at the end of your sentences.

When main actor meets heroine, suddenly they talk each other friendly.
>> When the main actor met the heroine, they suddenly talked to each other in a friendly manner.
I think that part is not smoothly.
>> I think that part is not smooth.
and I am curious about the method of their attack.
>> CORRECT!
there are 5 big robot. but 3 robots are destroyed as they are introduced

>> There are 5 big robots, but 3 robots were destroyed as they were introduced.