pacific rim3
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강사 첨삭
Hi!
Thank you for sharing that story with me. :)
Anyhow, I think that the robots were destroyed fast because the movie makers also wanted to show that they are just robots.
They will never be as strong and persistent as human beings. Just a thought. :)
Take care and see you in class!
~Teacher Nina~
1) Mike and Bill know each other quite well.
>>Correct!
2) Sue and Lisa haven\'t seen each other for ages.
>>Correct!
3) Peggy and Jane made this delicious cake themselves.
>>Correct!
4) Grandpa constructed this desk himself.
>>Correct!
5) Can we sell the things we made ourselves?
>>Correct!
6) The little girl can already ride the tricycle herself.
>>Correct!
7) Laura and Betty are helping each other with their homework.
>>Correct!
8) Some people only think of themselves .
>>Correct!
9) John and his girlfriend are still angry. They\'re not talking to each other.
>>Correct!
10) Does the laptop switch off itself automatical
>>Correct!
I continue to tell the story of pacific rim.
>>I will continue telling the story of the Pacific Rim.
and then, they have only two robot.
>>Then they had only two robots.
and the movie insist that they be believed the main robot and last hope.
>>The movie insisted that they were the main robots and that they were the last hope.
Finally they defeat monsters.
>>Finally, they defeated the monsters.
but I don\'t know why other robots are destroyed so fast.
>>But I don\'t know why the other robots were destroyed easily.
I am disappointed.
>>Correct!
because I want to watch the variety of attack and their own fighting skills.
>>Because I want to see the varieties of their attacks and their own fighting skills.
but 3 robots are too weak to show their perfomance and rest of robots\' skill is mere.
>>Three robots were too week to show their performance and the rest of the robots\' skills were mere...
I don\'t recommend you to watch it.
>>Correct!
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