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1. How often do you go to a convenience store?
I go to a convenience store twice a week.
Because I like to eat chocolate or protein bar.
I want to eat every day, but they are too high calories.
So I endure eating these.
And I go to a convenience store to buy something urgently
2. What are the best and worst things about the convenience store near your house?
The best thing is that I don\'t have to walk away for a long time
It is too convenient because I can buy something right away without a car
The worst thing is that I want to go there everyday.
There is a \'CU\' convenience store near my house.
It is famous for delicious desserts like cream breads.
So I can go easily there, but it is not good for my health.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Nicole.
I am glad to read you essay. Below are the corrections. Keep learning!
See you in class.
-Teacher Jessa
I go to a convenience store twice a week. Because I like to eat chocolate or protein bar.
>>I go to a convenience store twice a week because I like to eat chocolate or protein bar.
I want to eat every day, but they are too high calories. So I endure eating these.
>>I want to eat it every day, but they are too high in calories so I resist it.
And I go to a convenience store to buy something urgently.
And I go to a convenience store to buy something urgently.
>> I go to a convenience store to buy something urgently.
The best thing is that I don\'t have to walk away for a long time.
The best thing is that I don\'t have to walk away for a long time.
>>The best thing is that I don\'t have to walk for a long time.
Or>>The best thing is that I don’t have to walk far.
It is too convenient because I can buy something right away without a car
It is too convenient because I can buy something right away without a car
>>It’s very convenient because I can buy things right away without using a car.
The worst thing is that I want to go there everyday.
>>The problem is, I want to go there all the time.
There is a \'CU\' convenience store near my house.
>> A CU convenience store is located near my house.
It is famous for delicious desserts like cream breads.
It is famous for delicious desserts like cream breads.
>>It\'s known for its delicious desserts, especially cream bread.
So I can go easily there, but it is not good for my health.
So I can go easily there, but it is not good for my health.
>>So I can go there easily, but it\'s not good for my health.
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