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2021-09-29 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! :)

Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I\'m so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

1. Thank you for mom for hugging me.
>> I want to thank my mom for loving me.

2. Thank you my father for playing with me.
>> I want to thank my father for playing with me.

3. Thank you my friend for being with me.
>> I want to thank my friend for being there for me.

4. Thank you my teacher for teaching me.
>> I want to thank my teacher for teaching me.

5. Thank you my sister for being my sister.
>>I want to thank my sister for being my sister.

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