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1.what is the best thing about your birthplace?
I was born in the country and my parents did farming. So I grew up looking at green trees and grasses and I know their names very well.
It is good place to lisen to the sound of water from the stream and enjoy the time alone while talking a walk on a rainy day.
I am sorry that my hometown was changed a lot now.
My parents passed away, and people who lived in the same village when I was young moved to another place.
But my hometown that I remember when I was childhood is still in my heart.
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1.what is the best thing about your birthplace?
>> What is the best thing about your birthplace?
I was born in the country and my parents did farming.
I was born in the country and my parents did farming.
>> I was born in the country side and my parents were farmers.
So I grew up looking at green trees and grasses and I know their names very well.
>> I grew up looking at trees and grass and I know their names very well.
It is good place to lisen to the sound of water from the stream and enjoy the time alone while talking a walk on a rainy day.
It is good place to lisen to the sound of water from the stream and enjoy the time alone while talking a walk on a rainy day.
>> It is a god place to listen to the sound of water from the stream and enjoy the time alone while walking on a rainy day.
I am sorry that my hometown was changed a lot now.
I am sorry that my hometown was changed a lot now.
>> I am sorry that my hometown has changed a lot now.
>> I feel sorry that my hometown changed a lot.
My parents passed away, and people who lived in the same village when I was young moved to another place.
My parents passed away, and people who lived in the same village when I was young moved to another place.
>> My parents passed away and the people who lived in the same village when I was young moved to different places.
But my hometown that I remember when I was childhood is still in my heart.
But my hometown that I remember when I was childhood is still in my heart.
>> But the hometown that I remember when I was a child is still in my heart.
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