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2011-10-17 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

학생이 쓴 원문

1. i like books that i can have experiene and thanking more. also i can improve my memorizing skill. 2. i am ad avid reader of documentary. because i can get many kind of life from books. 3. books which stir up my imagination. 4. it enhances my power to understand. 5. i am a fanatic of documentary. cf. i thank number 2 and 3 are same question. so i write same answer.

강사 첨삭

Hi Chan,       It's nice to see you in this side of our website. ^^ I'm so happy that you answered the activity and passed it in our website. I hope you would write more everyday to improve your English ability. I have corrected some of your sentences. Please be guided: -T.Verna-   1. i like books that i can have experiene and thanking more. >>I like books which will make me think more.also i can improve my memorizing skill. >>Also, those that will help my momerization skill.2. i am ad avid reader of documentary. >>I'm an avid fan of documentary.  because i can get many kind of life from books. >>Because I can get information about different kinds of lives from books3. Books which stir up my imagination. >> Correct4. It enhances my power to understand. >> Correct5. I am a fanatic of documentary.>> Correctcf. i thank number 2 and 3 are same question. >> I think muner 1 and 2 are the same questions.  so i write same answer. >> So, I wrote the same answer.  

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