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학생이 쓴 원문
1. i like books that i can have experiene and thanking more.
also i can improve my memorizing skill.
2. i am ad avid reader of documentary. because i can get many kind of
life from books.
3. books which stir up my imagination.
4. it enhances my power to understand.
5. i am a fanatic of documentary.
cf. i thank number 2 and 3 are same question. so i write same answer.
강사 첨삭
Hi Chan,
It's nice to see you in this side of our website. ^^ I'm so happy that you answered the activity and passed it in our website. I hope you would write more everyday to improve your English ability. I have corrected some of your sentences. Please be guided:
-T.Verna-
1. i like books that i can have experiene and thanking more.
>>I like books which will make me think more.also i can improve my memorizing skill.
>>Also, those that will help my momerization skill.2. i am ad avid reader of documentary.
>>I'm an avid fan of documentary.
because i can get many kind of life from books.
>>Because I can get information about different kinds of lives from books3. Books which stir up my imagination.
>> Correct4. It enhances my power to understand.
>> Correct5. I am a fanatic of documentary.>> Correctcf. i thank number 2 and 3 are same question.
>> I think muner 1 and 2 are the same questions.
so i write same answer.
>> So, I wrote the same answer.
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