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2021-08-27 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

학생이 쓴 원문

The good things about living in Korea is that the bathroom is clean. The bad things about living in Korea is that school classes are boring.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^

Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I\'m so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

1. Floss - CORRECT
2. Shampoo - CORRECT
3. Soap- CORRECT
4. Mouthwash- CORRECT
5. Comb- CORRECT
6. Razor- CORRECT
7. Toothpaste - CORRECT
8. Toothbrush- CORRECT

The good things about living in Korea is that the bathroom is clean.
>> The good thing about living in South Korea is that the bathrooms are clean. 

The bad things about living in Korea is that school classes are boring.
>> The bad thing about living in South Korea is that school classes are boring.

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