Page turners
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Do you go to a piano concert often?
 When you go see a concert the person who usually get the applause at the end is the pianist. But if you see more closely you can see that the pianists don\'t finish the music on their own. There\'s someone beside the pianist who turns the page for them. These people are called page turners. They turn the page of the music for the pianists. It seems very simple but they need to turn it at the exact time for the pianists. And because they do their job properly the pianists could finish the concert  safely.
So you can see now that the concert is something more than just a one man show. It\'s a show that a lot of people helped to perform. Although I only told you about the page turners, there\'s much more peolpe behind the stage. And they all can be called a performer.
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Hi, Ji [이름]!
This is an interesting thought. It has been a while since I\'ve gone to any concert. I\'ve always wanted to see an orchestra performance but there hasn\'t been a chance. Maybe I could see one when the pandemic is gone. However, whenever I see that kind of performance on TV, I\'ve always been fond of the conductor. It\'s amazing how he can wave his hand to guide the musicians to follow the correct rhythm. Have a good day!
~Elica~
Do you go to a piano concert often?
>>CORRECT
 When you go see a concert the person who usually get the applause at the end is the pianist.
 When you go see a concert the person who usually get the applause at the end is the pianist.
>>When you go to see a concert, the person who usually gets the applause at the end is the pianist.
But if you see more closely you can see that the pianists don\'t finish the music on their own.
>>But if you look more closely, you can see that the pianists don\'t finish the piece on their own.
There\'s someone beside the pianist who turns the page for them.
>>There\'s someone beside the pianists who turns the page for them.
These people are called page turners.
>>These people are called the \"page turners\".
They turn the page of the music for the pianists.
>>They turn the pages of the music sheet for the pianists.
It seems very simple but they need to turn it at the exact time for the pianists.
>>It may seem very simple but they need to turn the pages at the exact time for the pianists.
And because they do their job properly the pianists could finish the concert  safely.
>>Because they do their jobs properly, the pianists could finish the concert successfully.
So you can see now that the concert is something more than just a one man show.
So you can see now that the concert is something more than just a one man show.
>>So now you can see that a concert is something more than just a one man show.
It\'s a show that a lot of people helped to perform.
>>It\'s a show that a lot of people help together to perform.
Although I only told you about the page turners, there\'s much more peolpe behind the stage.
>>Although I only told you about the page turners, there are so many people on stage.
And they all can be called a performer.
>>They can all be called \"performers\".
OR
>>They can each be called a \"performer.\"
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