Pain is a chance to overcome myself

I love this! 

As always, an amazing composition from Ms. [이름]. 

Thank you for being so expressive in your compositions and in class. 

~Teacher Eve.    

No pain, no gain.

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Have you ever heard of this?

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It implies that you need to endure pain to gain what you want.

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It is mostly true in our life.

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 For example, if you want to get a high score in the exam, you should study hard.

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 Some people are suffered from their own pain for a long time.

>> Some people suffer from their own pain for a long time.

They can\'t move forward because of depression or frustration that pain gives.

>> They can\'t move forward because of depression or frustration because of their pain.

However, I think, they will \'gain\' something because they endure difficult time.

>> However, I think, they will \'gain\' something because they have endured a difficult time.

They invest pain for learning something special.

>> They invest in pain to learn something special.

Pain will make them stronger, and they will walk toward better life. 

>> Pain will make them stronger, and they will walk towards a better life.
 We still hate getting pain even though we know it is sometimes necessary.

>> We still hate pain, even though we know it is sometimes necessary.

You don\'t always have to feel pain to become a better person.

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However, if you are on the path of pain, don\'t forget it\'s time to grow up.

>> However, if you are on the path of pain, don\'t forget that it\'s the time to grow up.

Don\'t be too afraid, and find a new lesson that pain gives.

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If you endure it, you can find yourself stronger.

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