Painting
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Theme: [ESSAY] How much are you willing to pay for a beautiful painting?
Umm....I saw a painting that is about ten million won.
But I can\'t buy that one.
I can use about... a million won.
Remember! It is when I am an adoult!
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Jean~~
Theme: [ESSAY] How much are you willing to pay for a beautiful painting?
Umm....I saw a painting that is about ten million won.
>> CORRECT
But I can\'t buy that one.
>> OR: But I can\'t possibly purchase that piece.
I can use about... a million won.
>> OR: I can probably spend roughly a million won.
Remember! It is when I am an adoult!
>> Remember! It is when I am an adult! [Mind the spelling of \"adult\".]
>> or: Take note! This is only when I become an adult or when I start earning my own money.
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