painting art

2023-08-01 · 첨삭 강사 Donna

학생이 쓴 원문

I would like to see modern art. I hope to find hidden meaning of the art and sympathy with artists. I am surprised If I know the meaning of the art that I did not notice. I realized that there are many different and various eyes.

강사 첨삭

Hi there again, Thomas!

Congratulations for composing all of these sentences correctly! I guess, you enjoy writing as much as you speak it.

Truly, a work of art can invoke various feelings and interpretations. Albeit the author\'s message may not be fully comprehended,  the meaning of a painting or art will have multiple interpretations overtime which makes the art work richer in meaning.

Thank you for the brilliant answer. See you again soon!

-T. Donna~

I would like to see modern art. 
>> Correct!

I hope to find hidden meaning of the art and sympathy with artists. 
>> Correct!
>> I hope to find hidden meanings of the art and sympathy with artists. 

I am surprised If I know the meaning of the art that I did not notice. 
>> Correct!
Or: if 

I realized that there are many different and various eyes.
>> Correct!

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